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[Bambinonero]

Ouch! Poor sweet Addison, wonder if she's gonna make it... It was very brave that she went alone after the chief baddie! Like the way Luna died, with the tongue sticking out of her pretty mouth, very embarrassing Funny how Aaron saved Hitler to help Addison -- let's see if it was all in vain...

[fleming]

Wow, what a truly amazing and exciting showdown. Love every moment of it.

Just loved how you wrote the blast and how Aaron saved the german leader we don't name.
It was a great touch that adds a whole new level of drama to it, if only he knew what he had done.

Poor Addison is so brave and so wonderful. Her showdown with Luna was so perfectly written and well though out.
Loved how she was still messed up from before and still managed to save the day, she's the real hero of the story, which I am just loving, she's the best.
Loved that she discarded her dress, smart and that it confused the guards was a nice touch.

The fight between the two girls was superbly written and so exciting and nerveracking, with every moment the knife moved closer to Addison's belly, my heart rate encreased from worry and when it sank in I felt so for her.
A truly beautiful stabbing with every last detail written to perfection, and she was perfecly attired for it too.
I know this is not in keeping with this sites theme but I so hope that she makes it, no one deserves it more. I think that if she doesn't I'll cry.

Loved how she handled Luna, she died just the right way, loved the way you described it, especially how she grasped the grass and her wound and her tongue slide out.
And the way you wrote her lying dead as Farve found her, wow.
Just loved how Farve found the info on her and burned it, he was right about that. Great moment.

Aaron scooping the poor heroic and wonderful Addison up to get her to the hospital was so great, lets hope that dim hope turns out to be more than dim.
Her question about weither this is what its like to die was so touching so sad.

A beautifully written chapter and I can't wait for the conclution.

[Britney Girl]

CHAPTER 15: Reflections



Aaron looked up and out at the clouds passing him by. He felt no desire to ever return to Germany. In a two day period he had lot not only his lover but also a part of himself. He had watched many people die, and even did some of the killing. He slowly pulled out a cigarette but discarded it before putting it in his mouth. Veronica wouldn’t have wanted him to be smoking in the presence of a lady, and that was, in fact where he was. He turned around to were Addison lay, she looked so beautiful asleep, even in such a silly looking hospital garment. He sighed again, relieved she was still alive. Beside her, her father slept in the chair by the hospital bed with a book in his lap.

Farve waited outside and when Aaron emerged from the room he tipped his cap. Farve looked younger than before the journey and Aaron felt as though he himself looked much older. Farve couldn’t smile at Aaron and cheer him up, it was just settling in the feelings for Veronica. He only hoped that his companion and one day replacement would be okay.

“Cloudy day out there Chap.” Farve said softly. Aaron sighed and exhaled. He thought a good cloudy day was the best, but not herein Berlin, not today.

“Its Rubbish…” Aaron said slowly. “All the Rain in England would look lovely now. All the Rain…” Aaron thought of Veronica’s face again, the face he would never see again. He knew it was worth the loss of her for the rest of the world but not for him. All the rain in England would be welcome to the Rain falling on his soul. The term “When it Rains it Pours” was really hitting home to Aaron Rodgers. He was an Inspector though, he would get over it.

“True, I’ll be happy to be home…” Farve agreed. Aaron slung his coat over his shoulder. He thought about Lori for a moment. He knew how much he had hated her after the death of Veronica, and he knew his heart could only be hard at the sound of her name, but Lori’s quest is what brought Divine down, stopped the end of the world. Aaron smiled suddenly. Veronica was gone, but he had promised her once he would always live for them both, just as she had made the same promise.

Captain Sinclair came from the hospital room. He gently closed the doors. He looked tired but was very relieved his daughter was okay. He adjusted his belt and sighed looking up at Aaron.

“She finally gets some sleep, what with all the German soldiers bringing her those lovely flowers and cards.” Addison’s father shook his head. “Damned Nazi’s trying to impress my daughter, they should no she would only settle for an Englishman.” Aaron smiled. It was true even the Great one, or Antichrist, depending on where you hail from, had brought Addison by a large vase of Edelweiss flowers from Austria. He had spoken to her in German, she didn’t understand him but Farve knew that the mustached man was only telling her to let all the lovely ladies in England know how great Germany was. Farve would come up with something better to tell her the German Dictator had said later when they were back in England.

“Some of them seemed like gentlemen to me Sir.” Aaron teased the older man. “I think Addison was just glad to see so many grateful people. Its hard for her to comprehend the fact she just saved this whole city.” Captain Sinclair shook his head and patted Aaron on the shoulder.

“So true young man, so true…” Sinclair looked at his watch. “Well its back to flying for me, try to request my ship home please, I would love to see my lovely daughter when she is well again.” Farve and Rodgers nodded and the fat and short bald man was gone. Aaron looked at Farve and the two men smiled. It had been a long few days and even though things were bad, they had saved the world.

“So I think I’m going to go pick up Addison a new dress would you like to come?” Aaron asked. Farve nodded his head.

“Your sense of fashion is all off, blimey, if I don’t come you’ll have the poor thing dressed in some accursed clashing colors!” Aaron smiled at his older partner and mentor.

“Lets go then, hopefully she will be ready to fly soon and we can get the hell home to bloody old England.” Aaron replied and the two men headed down the hospital stairs.





Marsha slowly screwed the silencer on her gun. She was sick and tired of people trying to make Divine what it wasn’t, she was sick and tired of environmental groups and extremists using and marring her company’s name. She stepped forward, her long thigh high boots echoed on the underground facility’s floor. She was a beautiful woman, long blonde hair and striking features, one of which being the rather unfitting scar across her left eye. She was tall and had large breasts, but not to large, perfect and full of perk. Her long slender legs were to be envied by all women and her luscious lips envied by all men.

“Ivanov was right about you Maria, you have let us down, letting that fool Luna use our resources! She nearly destroyed the planet!” Maria stood before her. A lovely girl of German decent, her long blonde hair flowed down her back. She was short and slender with a nice build, her breasts however, were quite a bit smaller than Marsha’s. She blinked her dark blue eyes.

“I’m sorry supreme lady, it will not happen again.” Maria felt a chill, she knew that it wouldn’t, but she also knew that it wasn’t because she would not be making anymore mistakes either. Marsha lowered the pistol and traced it down Maria’s body. Maria wore a black skirt and black panty hose with matching high heels. She ore a button up shirt which was now untucked. Marsha aimed at Maria’s lower belly then brought it up a tad and fired. Maria gasped and slapped a slender hand to her belly. Her blue eyes widened and she let out a soft moan. She took two steps back and slid out of her heels, now she looked even shorter before her master.

Marsha walked down and raised Maria’s chin. Maria’s lips were trembling and she was leaning forward doubled over in pain. Marsha raised her chin some more and shook her head in mock sympathy.

“There there darling, don’t cry…its better this was is it not? Better I kill you then she…” Marsha’s words were true. Maria slowly shook her head yes as a tear rolled down her cheek. She started to unbutton her shirt with her trembling hands. She could feel the bullet lodged in her guts, right in the center. It burned with a fire like ache. The bullet was low caliber, possibly a .22 but it had been enough. With trembling hands Maria opened the front of her shirt. Blood tricked down her belly and oozed from her deep belly button. Marsha smiled.

“Well look here dearly…bull’s-eye!” She said clapping. Maria was far less enthusiastic and let out s soft grunting sound and slowly fell back hard on her butt. Her eyes were full of tears and her once white top was now red. She coughed and tasted blood.

“Forgive me…..my…master…” Maria gasped letting the blood run down her body, hoping to die faster than if she tired to hold it in. Slowly she fell back on her back and stretched out pointing her toes and raking her long red fingernails against the wooden floor. Marsha was glad this was not her writhing on the floor, but she felt sympathy for the woman she had worked with over the last few years. She leaned down and pressed on Maria’s lower belly forcing more blood to run from the small wound. Maria let out a few gasps and groans and slowly her writhing stopped until she was still, sprawled out before Marsha, eyes open and wide staring lifeless at the light in the dimly let room. One leg bent at the knee and the other stretched out. Both her arms outstretched to her sides.

Marsha unscrewed the silencer. She though about Aaron. Farve, and Addison. She was actually glad they had succeeded, now she would one day be able to make her own plans, much less extreme then the fool Luna, but at the same time in their own ways quite sinister. Marsha laughed softly at the thought then turned out the light leaving Maria’s body to cool in the dark.
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[fleming]

A beautiful end to a beautiful story Britney.
So very happy Addison made it, you don't even know how much.
This was written with such care and such heart, especially Aaron's feelings.

Aaron's reflections on Veronica were so sad, poor guy but I loved it how he had promised her to live for both of them and I hope he will.
I appreciate what how he thought of Lori, it was a gentle closure to her character, the poor girl.

Addison being the toast of Berlin was a great touch that brought a smile to my face.
The partners going to get Addison a dress was sweet and a great way to say goodbye to them.
Hope its a very expencie one she'll love, she deserves that.

The little final scene with Marsha and Maria was just beyond cool and brilliantly written, just loved it and the way you wrote them, every detail so well described.
Poor Maria died so very pretty, a great death and I liked how Marsha felt for her a little bit and how she played with her with the silencer first.

Marsha seems one hell of an interesting character, I wonder if you've set up a sequel or a spin off for the future cause that'd be just super.

Anyway this was a spectacular story that I enjoyed to the max and now I can't wait for Aleira to return to us.
You've done a wonderful job and you should be proud.

Your nr 1 fan
Jóhann

[Thrill Killer]

Great stuff Britney. Going back to chapter 14, the stabbing of Addison just below her belly button was really neat, right in my favorite spot. The fact that with the right help soon enough kept it from being fatal. Guess that's OK. Now the shooting of Maria in chapter 15 was just brilliant and the way Marsha helped her along after putting a .22 bullet through her belly button by pressing on her belly below it to force her to bleed out faster. That was a neat touch. By the way, what kind of revolver holds 7 shots? T.K.

[Britney Girl]

I have one, lol, that's why i used it, its called a Taurus 66 and its a 357 magnum

Taurus .357
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[Thrill Killer]

WOW! That's a BIG gun for such a sweet young lady like you. Sweet, young and BEAUTIFUL. T.K.

[Britney Girl]

I know, i dont like it, its loud and hurts my wrist, but its for self defense, i keep it in my night table by the bed
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[fleming]

I pity the fool who tries to mess with you Britney , glad to hear you keep safe. ;)